ThatsNotRooki's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[DesertBanner]

The clouds and colours are really nice.
I think what would help is if you separated the foreground/midground/background more by fading out the colours to help create a sense of depth.

Joplexem responds:

I'll def give this a try, thanks for the tip

[Fa!lman]

I've never heard of Failman but this is pretty neat. Nice work

Dodo-bot responds:

Thanks!! You should play it. It's here on newgrounds by the same name :)))